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Ant And Zach Get Art

by fatsuma

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Overall a good concept,the use of time lapses is a real strength.For me i think less dialogue could of been used with more discriptive interludes punctuated througout the piece.This could of been used as building blocks for the character profiles.A interesting twist is also incorperated which adds to the value of the work rather than being used in a writing by numbers way.

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