A disappointing read that failed to engage largely because of the mistakes that litter the writing throughout. Even the synopsis has a typo in 'paining' and any clarity of 'an imagery short story telling the story' is lost on me.
The idea of categorizing Pauline by her hair colour is a good one within a theme of the objectification of women but it is not consistent and so loses meaning.
I think there is a good story here to be told but the lack of care puts off any serious reader. I notice there have been nineteen reads but no comments. I feel I know the reason why.