Hey Ed thanks for the add. I saw your comment on the review I gave someone that was "causing a stir" this month. It's controversial because the writer had his friends go on and hit disagree. Why? Because the writer can't take constructive criticism. Take a look at the script and you'll see. Like you said, it's better to find on here than to submit to someone and have it trashed due to all the errors in it. The writer needs either a thicker skin or another hobby.
'many great things I can do' Yes, Adastra, and believe me, I am convinced you have what it takes to succeed as a writer. Read 'Redemption' and think it has great potential. Will write a little critique. Enjoy your break, come back refreshed!
Dawn Chapman