Hi Donnetta, just read on your profile that you were keen on feedback. If you have a project you'd like me to read and feedback on then say and I'd be happy to. If you'd return the favour for my short play Dead Birds then I'd be extremely happy. All the best,
I like your writing style in general, and your way of controlling a short story into beginning - end... I'm feeling that your writing of dialogue is a little bit pedestrian sometimes... I do like reading your work though, it's sharp and to the point
I agree, I think it's great that this is an open platform for writers and reviewers. Everyone is entitled to their opinion; it is what it is.
At the end of the day, we're all here to try and improve. Most of all, we're here because we enjoy it, as most of us are not getting paid.
Thanks for checking out my stuff. You keep up the good work too.
I enjoy reading and writing. I NEED feedback-criticism on my writing otherwise I wouldn't survive as a writer. I pay for feedback on my writing and I submit my writings on sites all over just to get it. I do however have a voice and a right to express myself regardless if you like it or not. I received a comment on a "quote" I posted. Not my quote but someone else's and yet I am the one that can't take constructive criticism?