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Smoke And Mirrors

by Stuart Curran

Good voiceover
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Hi Stuart. Regarding "Smoke and Mirrors" I liked the voiceover (interesting and powerful thoughts) but I would have liked the flash-backs scenes to be a little bit more original. For example I found the bathroom scene has already been used a lot in films. Congratulations for winning the competition anyway and good luck!

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