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  • Martin Byrne

  • 2011-12-06 16:43:11
  • Hi, It's difficult to write any sort of review on what is available to view here so far so I don't want to mark you down for character etc when I can't get a grasp of character etc One thing from just reading this synopsis - It's not clear to me what you mean by "possessive." I don't understand what a "possessive" theme is or what you mean by "reciprocal possession" or a "possessive climax." It's obviously something you know inside out as you have written an enormous novel based around this but to the outsider it isn't clear and if you are looking for feedback then that could be off-putting. M