after reading the pages provided im very intrigued to found out what comes next and what is to find at the town. just one comment, they survive the air raides and then they are told they are immune to the virus. i didnt know that until it was stated by the caretaker and then felt i missed something. maybe a sentence or two early on explaining they are immune, how they are immune and consequences of not being immune might be good.
haydenwas