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Johnny in a puddle

by Dan Sumners

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An interesting tale. I think I need to read it again to fully understand it. The story kept me intrigued right up to the end so that in itself is a good thing. I think it is slightly too long however for the story it tells. Im a bit confused as to who Bernard was looking for when he first discovered the condom. When compared to the power of the woman his weak attempts to find its owner, seem doomed from the start.

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