Senseless

Powerful stuff!

by nebmai

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This is a very powerful piece. It has made good use of the first person perspective. The subject matter and vocabulary are explorative in such a way that you cannot help but be drawn in to the character. Consequently you are taken on a journey through one man's contemplative torture yet with rewarding release. Buckle in!

Conversations

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  • nebmai

  • 2011-12-22 23:13:11
  • You are welcome!
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  • Dan Sumners

  • 2011-12-15 18:36:34
  • thanks very much!