One Lion

intriguing in what it didn't say, there was a lot of introspection which i don't normally like but with your piece it kept the plot simmering so that was a good thing, i thought it was petering out as an interesting piece until that clever ending which elevated it as a work, think it could have covered a bit more, of the pre-plot, perhaps a trigger event mssing? and upped the emotional tenure but a smart piece all in all - well done