Reviews
I somewhat enjoyed the first part of the script - I enjoyed Sasha's character and wanted to read on. However, when it turned into the whole 28 days la ...
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My constructive criticism here:
your tension builds too suddenly. We go from comedic to serious almost immediately on the discovery of the postman ...
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Hi Gareth,
I wasn't sure where this was going until I got to the end. My immediate thought was a gleeful "Excellent!" (I also had a big smile).
I've ...
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I would have thought that a Voice Over would have worked better than her actually speaking to herself or anyone out there, not listening. The world e ...
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The writing is good. The dialogue seemed great but as you move further along it gets heavier like the action descriptions, and wordiness.
It's ok ...
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OK, so here is a tough review for a very good piece. I was very tempted to give 5 stars for writing style, and I might have, as your writing style is ...
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I didn't really see this screenplay as a horror. Although the character was I thought you scared atimes it didn't really make me feel tense. I th ...
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This is more of a thriller than a horror and a rather often used scenario at that, although the little twist at the end move it forward a notch. The k ...
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I love love love horror. I actually remember an episode of the Twilight Zone that was like this. Maybe I like it so much because it reminds me of the ...
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So here I am,
And here are some thoughts, I enjoyed the story, it was really well written, but I have heard it before. A long time ago I might add ...
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What really makes this work is the twist at the end. I won't spoil it by saying what that is. It had a darkness that reminded me of the ending of The ...
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What I like:
The character. She acts and talks like a real goth princess.
The monologue. It's what I'd expect a 'goth girl' to say to herself. ...
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