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Doctor Who And The Time Cuckoo

by Gilbank

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by pixth
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I like it. It's very interesting especially when he accuses her of stealing. I believe the Characters are strong. The dialogue feels comical, but then the start feels serious, I might just get it wrong, but I like it. I like the writing style. It's very easy to follow. The concept, well I don't have much idea where the story is heading, only the doctor gets killed by a sniper. Post more please

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    • Gilbank

    • 2012-01-16 20:29:17
    • Thanks pixth - I've uploaded the entire project again...i struggled to get it up on this file so I've done a second file. Love to hear your comments. Cheers dave

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