The Dead Line
This is a great period story. I enjoyed everything in it. You did a great job keeping it in your mind and our mind what time we are in. The characters were intresting and moving. Lots of good vibes with the interaction of the people. I'm not really sure about the dialogue. it was smooth and made sense. The only thing I'm sure about is some of the wording for the time. The concept of the storyline was great. It made sense and you hit all the high lights. I really enjoyed it. The writing style was great. Lots of flow and lots of white. It was good. I'm excited about period movies. Especially when they are successfully pulled off. Be proud. It's a great story,
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