My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
Ah I'm really glad you liked it. If you're interested in knowing what happens next there is a feature version on my projects. It's only the first 30 pages though.
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