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All In A Days Work

by glm1977

Won me over
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Cannot say I was instantly taken by this entry. But I kept coming back to read it. My main problem was that it is "seen it all before........several times before". Not a good start to a favourable review, I know. Regardless! Given recent events, VERY recent events, involving government benefits, rises in student loans, lying politicians, rat-faced politicians and one-eyed politicians, I found the message that I got from your script to be very poignant. Yes, its mostly man versus machine, but there's also a bit of big shot guy versus the little guy in there. I'm probably seeing this the wrong way, but I find that way to be very intelligent, insightful of you. As I've said in other reviews it's difficult to rate the stars because the scripts are so short, but if it works, it works.

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