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Hi,
Pretty much all my scripts are a work in progress, started when I was fifteen and at lot of them haven't been touched for seven or so years so I could use fresh eyes on them to progress further, any critisms would be welcome, Will be uploading more as soon as I can.
I have put up first drafts of two screenplays. I am new to screenwriting so any suggestions would be very much appreciated. I may have some formatting issues, as Celtx is still a mystery me. Anyway the projects are called Blue Boar and Univerally Educated Amatuers. Thank you :)
One of my screenplay is about 6 kids lying about a sleep over. Instead they go out at night for adventure. The second one is about a girl who lives two lives, a conservative one and a graffiti one. I am currently working on a feature screenplay and a martial arts short, inspire on Tony Jaa's style of action.
http://www.circalit.com/newyorkqueens
Thank you Kindly
Hey,
This has changed a bit since i up loaded but would love to hear what people think.
Is it a good set up for the story etc. thanks in advance
Michael
http://www.circalit.com/mscanlon/screenplays/
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