My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
It is hard when we're rejected, but you have a good story, I did enjoy it a lot. Did they offer you any feedback? Have you thought about going for any 'pro feedback'? Just curious. I know that sometimes some people just won't gel with your script. So don't give up just yet, but if further down the line you're still getting rejections, then maybe you could call on a pro. There are a few out there who I'd recommend. :) I've used a couple before today.