If you should ever get the time I would greatly appreciate a review The Mark. I am around 80 pages into the work and if something is not working it would be great to know it now.
On the whole it feels okay as far as the pacing and character development goes, but I just do not trust my own judgement. The one review you did was perfect in my opinion. Tough but was followed up with good advice.
Thanks.
adam.chandler