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jackcuthbert

London England

Just finished What If God Was One Of Us

I am a screenwriter working hard writing various different scripts at a time trying to make it in this business and still maintain my principles! Currently working on a TV series and a romantic comedy but don't expect the usual boy meets girl story from me. Massively interested in music as you will see if you read any of my scripts. Currently studying a film degree at London Southbank University.

Birthday 30-06-1988

Gender male

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- Corinne Abraham
- 2012-07-26 20:23:34
- I'm sorry it took so long for me to read your screenplay
- Nathan Braund
- 2012-06-26 14:25:44
- Hi, hope all’s well. Just to let you know my novel, ‘The Broken Boots Guide to Astlavonia’ has just been published. It’s a black comedy about a debt-ridden divorcee who is sent to Astlavonia, a former soviet state, to write its first ever guidebook but discovers all disputes are settled with a knife. If you’d like to read the first chapter and find out more, please visit www.nathanbraund.com. Please help an unknown writer by telling your friends. Thanks very much. Nathan astlavonia@yahoo.com
- haleyk8
- 2012-05-08 10:53:39
- Hi Jack - i'll give it a review this week sometime x
- Anthony Rothe
- 2012-04-04 23:13:07
- It would be good to know, Jack, what sort of feedback you would like - about what aspect of your script? What are your doubts / insecurities about the piece, and want to know about what ? and whether it works. I took a look and there are notational problems that would make it look more 'professional' a script, in my opinion - like a title on P.1. and FADE IN: ; THE title is ON THE NOSE, but it gets the message across. The 3rd para jumbles more action together than the camera shots it implies - usually a shot per sentence, but you've opted to DESCRIBE the action and have used PASSIVE VOICE: 'JIM IS LAYING' - SHOULD BE JIM IS ON / OR 'Jim lies ... ' - I thought be fore I read further I'd check out what you wanted to know, because I doubt that it is any of the above.
- neilwills
- 2012-03-04 07:53:09
- Hi Jack, If you get a chance could you please read my entry for the Scifi competition Solar Surfer? Thanks Neil It is at http://www.circalit.com/neilwills/projects/project_1329855405/?readScreen=true