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jamieac

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Been playing around with some stuff. Just added a new project. Feedback would be good. If you don't like it, tell me why..

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- neilwills
- 2012-03-04 08:02:23
- Hi Jamie, If you get a chance could you please read my entry for the Scifi competition Solar Surfer? I will of course reciprocate if you want me to return the favour. Thanks Neil It is at http://www.circalit.com/neilwills/projects/project_1329855405/?readScreen=true
- Teresa Hamilton
- 2010-12-03 10:43:24
- Thanks for the fanship jamieac. Glad you liked it.
- jamieac
- 2010-12-01 06:28:43
- thanks writingmum, sorry Bryan stole your slot, in some ways I feel responsible... I didn't take Bryan's comments as being controversial, it's interesting to see how different people read something one has written. I agree about the dialogue points bit - although this piece is unusal for me in that there is no dialogue, my characters are usually quite verbose!
- jamieac
- 2010-11-29 07:19:37
- Thanks for the review, Bryan. Glad you liked it. It's not perfect that's for sure, but I'm not sure it would benefit from more about Emily. I think there's room to do more with the arrival of the dog and the woman, who is only a voice - she could be more, pique his interest, maybe she sounds like Emily. I feel another story coming on.