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Hi jammindave, I think it has pretty much all been said in other reviews. I really like the 'warm moment' the script heads for as I talk to people all day in multiple languages and none of them seem to know how to ask me how I'm doing! I'm a total newbie to screenwriting (my entry is my first ever film or t.v. script), so when I posted the first draft of my piece I got some pretty harsh reviews and told in no unclear terms to go away and learn to format. I'm still no master, but ten drafts later, and I have a lot more stars. Redraft, tap my wire and I bet you can get some more stars up there. Soak up what your audience are saying and try and use it and you can get a lot out of this site. Good luck ?????