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Quirky indeed

Wish Me Luck!

by jayrex

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Type: Short

Genre: Animation, Comedy, Quirky,

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  • jayrex

  • 2011-07-24 01:43:09
  • Cheers Alffy for your positive comments. I don't want to give too much away for any new readers, but to answer your comments, I think I'm going to have to. Lex has two sides to him. He does have a dating agency and the girls he has are there to go on dates. But at the same time, he's a pimp. So when the girls aren't on actual dates, Lex pimps them out. And in a way, Lex used Will to make money, and is using Keeley again at the very end to make money. I've tried to make this as subtle as possible. Cheers for the read, Javier
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  • alffy

  • 2011-07-19 22:00:33
  • What a bizarre concept. Brilliant characters and setting and I loved the little in-jokes, they tickled me. I'm tired so forgive me for being stupid but I think I missed the real point here? Is it just about a dating agency and if so why did Keeley agree to go on a date with Will? This didn’t distract from the comedy and the fact this was a great read though. Good work.
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  • jayrex

  • 2010-11-28 15:19:47
  • Cheers for the read Dominic, much appreciated. Cheers for the error, changed it already. Pesky mistakes always slipping by me.
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  • jayrex

  • 2010-09-12 15:06:35
  • Cheers for the reads Calvin and wbmonahan. Much appreciated. Glad you both like this script. JT
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  • Cool Calvin

  • 2010-09-10 08:45:58
  • Great read, timely comedy for an adult audience. Barney the Sheep in Wolf's clothing. I was really able to draw a picture in my head. Beast of luck.

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