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Taking Advantage

by jharlow

so charming!
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was grinning throughout most of it. nice sense of humor, pacing was good. the only thing was it kind of fizzled out at the end. i was really hoping that there would be some kind of punchline - maybe she drives the car off a cliff or something. other than that, very nice!

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