MCU3 - Pilot (5th Draft)

I feel that I should start by saying that this is a really strong pilot and it's so close to being special. It might seem like I'm being ... Read More

Hi, I dont know much about screen writing, so my feedback may not be strong on the technical aspects of your piece, but I found it so aborbing th ... Read More

Hi John,

Honestly, this was a great piece of writing that should get you some real atten ... Read More

This is a very interesting concept to me.  There are a few typos still here and there.  A few in the first few pages jumped out at me, ... Read More