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Happy Returns

by john kloosterman

A funny, quick story
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I thought this was a nice little concept. A neat little idea that could be expanded into a larger story or kept as good little sketch. I initially found it a bit confusing to follow in terms of who was saying what as it is quite dialogue-heavy and therefore more suited to a sketch environment rather than short story, but once I got the gist, though it was good.

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