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Happy Returns

by john kloosterman

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I enjoyed the lift/elevator setting. The little details are crucial to the short length of the story, so there probably wouldn't be much room for small talk, but I did wonder if anyone would divulge that amount of backstory in such a short space of time! Would have liked to have seen a bit more subtlety, leaving me to join the dots, but overall I quite liked it.

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