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WHAT WOULD ABE DO

by Jim Starr

Nice bit of satire
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Nice bit of satire. I like the pace of this; the brisk walk-through to the closing door...good structure.  Lincoln staying mute - spot on. The world of advertising so often invites satire -  vacuous and soulless - but your Lincoln injected something surprising.   

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