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Faith

by karenfreeman

Okay Story - not complete
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I love the descriptions in the story and the way you've told the reader of the main characters difficulties in explaining themselves. I think that the story could have been completed better and that you should focus more on the woman Faith, where she came from, who she is, what she looks like. Is good, but could be better

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    • karenfreeman

    • 2011-11-16 09:12:47
    • You have got me thinking. Thank you for the input.

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