Have written a quick review, not sure if all makes sense or is of use but am new to this so please take it with a pinch of salt. Happy to discuss it if you have any queries. I haven't got anything uploaded at mo that I'm bothered about but should be posting something in next coupla days that I wouldn't mind getting an opinion on. Will let you know. Cheers. Gareth.
Have read over 'a long day'. Will review it later this eve. I realise its only first draft so do you want me to list things like spelling errors and layout or concentrate on the content and story? Gareth