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Keep Your Friends Close, And Your Enemies Closer

by kiiiren

Logline

Two school kids lives are changed forever after being victims of a vicious knife attack in Central London. It's not always the obvious that you have to watch out for.

Type: Short

Genre: Crime, Drama, Reality,

Synopsis

Jamal and Jordan are school kids and best friends. They are on their way home from football practise when they are followed by a gang at Stratford Station. Jamal is killed during a knife attack and Jordan is left to pick up the pieces. As the story unfolds we find that the killing isn't as innocent or random as it seems. Jamal was killed for a reason.

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    • tonysmith4737

    • 2011-08-24 15:07:22
    • good story, nice twist... some of the dialogue feels a bit pedestrian though
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    • littleh

    • 2011-08-22 19:30:27
    • It starts off being a cruel murder, but soon the story unfolds in a way you'd never expect!

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