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by kimkovac

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A pregnant woman, terrorized by a stranger, discovers he has an abducted child and she must fight for their lives.

Type: Short

Genre: Thriller, Suspense,

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A young (high-risk pregnancy) woman driving home late at night encounters a horrifying man while sitting at a redlight. Just before the light changes, she notices the little hand of a child that is being concealed in the truck. She sets off to follow him while trying to call for help. He knows she's following and turns to face her. Now she must fight for her life and the life of the child, knowing that she could lose the life of her own baby in the process.

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    • carlj

    • 2010-03-18 17:31:53
    • I couldn't finish it. The format is bad. You need to separate some of that action. Also the scenes where you see the dispacther doesn't make sense. You have drama and tension then you switch to comedy. It feels to sudden and it doesn't work. You also change persplective and it is hard to adjust and read when all you are concerned with is the tension with Vanessa.

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