I really enjoyed this. It swept me along. I particularly like the use of the word poplar, it's not a word, I've heard very often in description. I thought that the whole thing had a cool bohemian feel to it. Really nice. I shall certainly be reading more of your work.
Hi rjleek, thankyou so much for your kind and encouraging review - much appreciated. I never thought of it as cool bohemian but I'm flattered! I'll have a look at your work too.
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