My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
Hey thanks, should hopefully have a second draft up by then. Think if you follow the whole slugline, description action then dialogue you cant go too wrong.
Although the way in which you've done it kinda fits the script for doing a graphic novel.