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GRINDYOURTEETHR

by laurajo

fast paced, good twist
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I liked the fast pace of the piece, the quick dialogue made me fell like the character was in a real rush. I found the twist amusing but was then a little disappointed after that. Her dialogue was good and i get that he was just peeved about having a small penis but that was it.

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