15 Minutes.
by lenman
Logline
Two men discuss life's little annoyances on their way to meet a friend.
Type: Short
Genre: Drama,
Synopsis
Co-written by ajrscreenworks.
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mattman2900
- 2010-09-01 16:03:33
- Hey, just read "15 minutes" Nice short. Though I couldn't connect with the characters. It's not the writing or anything I just I never latch on to these types of characters for whatever reason... then again maybe I did connect with them and don't know it. :) Anyway very well written and I want to know - where the descriptions intentional clues? Because I used those to figure out about Frank. Hopefully your guy that's filming this short will find time to complete the film, and can't wait to see it!! -Matt
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ajrscreenworks
- 2010-06-20 11:18:31
- Thanks for reading kenster - Update - yesterday we heard from the guy who's filming this. He wants to re-shoot the car scene, however he hasn't had time because he just booked one of the bigger roles in an upcoming Syfy series. Our luck that the guy had to go and become a star mid-shoot, huh? (0: Anthony
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kenster1975
- 2010-06-19 19:51:43
- Thanks for read but it feels very very similar to the scene in 'Pulp Fiction'. And also, it is just that - a scene. IMO - a short film script should be more than just a beat. Good luck with it all.
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