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King Boot

by levand

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Spaghetti Western Meets Martial Arts Revenge Story

Type: Feature

Genre: Action, Martial Arts, Revenge,

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This is an example of the kind of material we are looking for with future projects.

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    • carlj

    • 2010-05-06 17:30:51
    • It seems fine. There are parts where I was wonderign if the dialogue was gramatically incorrect for a purpose. I wasn't sure. I never liked the "and we..." Cut to parts, just let it cut to.
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    • Keith Appleby

    • 2010-04-28 17:50:10
    • i read part of it, and have visions of faulty towers and manuel the servant
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    • Roy Gonzales

    • 2010-04-25 11:42:06
    • I read it and liked it a lot. Others that read it, will complain about the large blocks of discriptions you use. I didn't have a problem with it. But, it just might be something you may want to look at, if you do another draft. Other than that I thought it was great. Roy.

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