Conversations

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  • Cheryl Laughlin

  • 2010-10-12 11:39:40
  • Hi Stoney, For some reason in San Francisco they call them MUNI buses (believe it's short for Municipal). Back in Ohio where I grew up, they called them RTD buses(Rural Transport District). So for some reason people in San Fran always tell you to just grab the Muni (unless you want to take the trolley). :]
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  • liam197199

  • 2010-10-10 18:07:45
  • This sounds really interesting can't wait to give it a read :D
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  • Cheryl Laughlin

  • 2010-10-09 02:58:15
  • Thanks, jamjo! My antagonist kicks in about 2 more pages past the 30 pages for the contest. So did a bit of tightening to get that element to hit before the cutoff. Let me know if I can offer any notes in return. :]
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  • uncgym44

  • 2010-09-30 16:39:01
  • I really enjoyed the story and felt very attached to your character very quickly. Would love to read more. Well done.
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  • aisforanxiety

  • 2010-09-30 15:31:13
  • I liked the contrast between the idealized, "I love Ireland" bit and the street wise attitude. (By the way, we could be related, you share my mothers maiden name and I live in County Down... ha ha)