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A Life Time (short)

by liam197199

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Hi liam, I just read through this short a few times. It's interesting but I kinda struggled to follow the story. Particularly The Man. Who was he and why did he suddenly vanish? Was he kiled at war? It might be that you deliberately kept things vague or that I'm just missing something... Might work as an animation I thought as it would be a very expensive short to make what with all of the loactions and time periods. Thanks for letting me read it David

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