A Life Time (short)

A neatly written story, no major formatting issues(FADE IN: is on a slugline), I didn't spot any major typos or grammatical problems. I liked the action lines, they were done very well. The logline says 'An Immortal man finds another of his kind'. I would have expected this to be central to the overall plot but it just didn't seem to happpen. A series of well written vignettes told by some good narration, however I failed to see what any of them had to do with anything, and it all became a little tedious and meaningless after a while. I'm not quite sure how this story was inspired by the film Thrush but it was nicely written piece that may need some work.