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  • Giant Rumblebuffin

  • 2012-03-07 15:20:05
  • Very well written - an enjoyable read. I found it a bit melodramic towards the end and am not wholly convinced that someone as talented as N's sister would have let themselves die from drug abuse when there are plenty of treatments available. Maybe it's in her personality but that would need to be referenced. But, I'm nitpicking, on the whole I thought it was great
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  • Claydona

  • 2010-09-13 08:39:16
  • Nice work. I thought it was very well written with a nice sense of nostalgia. You painted a full character in very few words.