Reviews have started... first 5 pages, and if you get a moment to answer the questions I'm posing at the end, I'd be much appresh
Living with Jesus, my first professional commission, was shot in September 2011 - originally a webisode pilot, its recently been rewritten into a full TV spec. Watch this space...
One page of feedback on the first 10 pages of your script - this feedback will focus (unless you request otherwise) on the initial impact, tone, and style of the piece, as well as looking at the extent to which your script may make a reader want to continue.
Producers having an immensely difficult predicament constantly hounding them. They are simultaneously inundated with new material claiming to be 'the next big thing', yet find themselves constantly busy trying to create 'the next best thing'. Therefore the majority of the reading will fall to an intern or assistant, who is often asked to give a 'first impression' after the initial 10 pages. If that first impression is bad, your script's already in the bin. On the rare occasion that a producer actually has time to read something his assistant recommends, he will drop it the second it loses pace. Those 10 pages are vital. They need to be unbelievable, incomparable and, ultimately, sellable. Through this service, I hope to help you reach this point.
I will read your script and lead a discussion highlighting the strengths and weaknesses of your script and how you can make it ready to submit to producers and agents. The conversation will last 30mins to 1hr during which time you can ask any questions. After purchasing this service I will be in touch by email to sort out a time and date for the call.
It is crucial that you have professional feedback on your script before re-drafting it and submitting it to agents and producers. My aim is to help you bring out the very best of your in your script, to get it ready for submitting to agents and producers.
I will provide you with a 1-2 page feedback report on your screenplay, analysing the character, tone, structure and written style.
It is crucial that you have professional feedback on your script before re-drafting it and submitting it to agents and producers. My aim is to help you bring out the very best of your in your script, to get it ready for submitting to agents and producers.
Delivery time:
3 weeks
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