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Yawn

by Matthew Comras

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The yawn that changed my life. Funny what happens when you open your mouth.

Type: Short Story

Genre: Quirky, Reality, Romance,

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    • Hannah Ruth Hassack

    • 2011-11-25 15:24:41
    • Very good, very you, got lost in the hippo banter but but think I found myself again by the end of it. You are very good at articulating concepts most of us don't even notice to be true. Well done x
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    • edge

    • 2011-11-23 17:45:02
    • I liked it.
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    • keithpotato

    • 2011-11-20 16:24:21
    • Great read! Really imaginative and engaging descriptions of those every day and mundane situations we all know too well. He's writing what we're all thinking! You can bite my nose any time Mattiles.
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    • aims

    • 2011-11-20 12:33:17
    • I loved this short story. It's poignant yet surreal, accurately depicting everyday observations pertinent in the average commuter's life whilst making light of the tedium of rush hour travel. Thanks!
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    • Matthew Comras

    • 2011-11-14 23:51:55
    • Oh right, thanks! Have changed it.

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