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jwent6688
- 2010-05-27 00:41:28
- Michael, honest question. Wouldn't the voice in the opening be (o.s.) cus we can't see them?? Good little story here. Wanted to see where it ended, but page 5 and 6 were not available to me. Funny place this Circalit. Getting used to it. Loved what you had, a diamond in the ruff, who should stay there a bit... James
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mcornetto
- 2010-05-19 21:51:37
- I've been trying to update this with the full screenplay but I just can't get it to work and I don't want to lose these reads or comments by updating another version. If you look down in the comments you will find a link to the full version.
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criticaltodd
- 2010-05-13 14:55:45
- I like what I saw - very nice characterizations. I'd love to know where you take it and how you resolve it.
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