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The Junk Drawer

by mcornetto

A really interesting concept.
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We all have a junk drawer, and the idea that the things inside could be competing for use is pretty bizarre, but in a short space of time you make an interesting story. We get a very brief intro into each specific item; in a short space of time sometimes less characters work better, but the comedy aspect of this makes the quick introductions fill their purposes adequately. Even though the characters have their own distinct voices, sometimes the dialogue was a bit unnatural, but on the other hand specific examples like the lion on the coin spreading out to stop it flipping add really nice comical touches. And to cap all this, we think the ring is being saved only for it to be displayed in a showroom; very nice light-hearted humour overall!

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