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Hit And Run

by melmelp

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Loving this script. I can see the images being created. I’m taken right inside the worlds of these two women. Coming from such different places but sharing one thing in common... (don’t want to spoil it for anybody!). There are truley some poignant images- and the end - oh my gosh, you want to just reach right inside the story and grab that baby. I think the writing works very well. The dialogue captures two very different styles and the screenwriter gives us just enough. The timing and pacing are good too. I’m taken away with it. I’m loving the tension. Very well done.

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