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Hit And Run

by melmelp

Sad story.
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This is well written and touching, but ultimately quite sad, and without any real message or purpose. The opening scenes set things up wonderfully. I think the abusive lover is probably unnecessary. Also, I love the fact that Becky suggested Leah's name right before she hit her, but a script is just a blueprint for a film, and the irony would have been missed by the audience, as Leah is never name checked.

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