Drawing From Life
Interesting story with good descriptions
I read this as I'm currently writing a story with a similar theme.
I enjoyed the way you told this story; a little different from the norm. It read like a diary entry which I liked. Your descriptions were very visual and captured the thoughts of a teenage boy very well; his uncertainty of his own reactions to the situation.
The ending was unexpected but good though. Overall, an enjoyable little read.
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