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Liverpool (version 2)

by mikeormsby

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A nicely articulated random pick of fond remembrances. While memories do come at you like that, something more specific about place might pull it toge ... Read More
I read this before you revised it and found it very moving. Your portrayal of your father felt so vivid that the images stayed with me. I think the re ... Read More
I thought that this was very easy to read and most enjoyable and I felt that the writer became more lyrical and flowing as it was getting nearer to th ... Read More
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I read this at lunch today at work. I've also entered the contest and I have to say this is going to be very hard to top. You can talk all you like ab ... Read More
What I liked about this was the lovingly remembered details of your father's life, each piece carefully selected to show us what kind of man he was. W ... Read More
Enjoyed this story a lot, it communicates so much affection for the good-humoured, interesting dad. Like the funny phrases he comes out with. There is ... Read More
The story made me cry. Simplicity is used in a genius way. The details are the strong points of the story. The character of the father is more than su ... Read More
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This is so much better. You have managed to keep the character of your dad there and the Transylvania link now makes much more sense. The little detai ... Read More