New short film (My Depressed Buddy)added! Please give feedback! Will return feedback if received :)
I just enjoy writing, if that leads me somewhere then I'll be very happy but if not then I'll write for the pleasure. If you review any of my projects then I'll happily return the favour, just tell me which project you'd like reviewed.
Just done with writing my first script and can use some expert advice from you. Would you mind reviewing my short film script and le me know how i can better it. would be of great help.
Thanks in advance
Just to let you know I have reedited my story in accordance with your feedback, if you have any spare time I would love it if you could take a read as I felt your feedback was extremely helpful. Thank you for taking up your time to read it anyways in the first place :)
Thanks very much for the review, really appreciated it and I agree with points you made. Has my story become too obvious now, which parts would you suggest removing/changing to make less obvious? I will have a read of your work. But thank you again for the review.
Take care Louise