(Work in progress) Scene 1 from a play I'm writing which explores the lives of 6 people on a particular street on Christmas eve. I REALLY need feedback.
The first scene in a play I'm working on that revolves around two homeless men learning to trust each other, see positivity in their situation and save each other from the prospect of being alone on Christmas day. Please provide feedback, I need all your opinions! Thank you :) Will try and return the favour if you manage to give me a review.